Here is some feedback I received from family members.
"I like the friendship theme to the video and especially the blurry shot of the girls outside the school as it shows their really having fun and enjoying each others company. Also the framing of the books in the cupboard at the beginning is really nice. The shots of you putting the whole juice box into the basket is funny along with the man stroking the shovel. The bench shots take you out of reality which is what music videos do. However, I don't particularly like the bench shot at 1:38 as it seems so natural, almost boring. Maybe at the end there could be a bright light shining out of the box to make whatever's in there really spectacular."
"The energy and youthfulness of the music video shines through, but you should add different, more comical transitions if possible to add to the quirky theme."
"I like the friendship theme to the video and especially the blurry shot of the girls outside the school as it shows their really having fun and enjoying each others company. Also the framing of the books in the cupboard at the beginning is really nice. The shots of you putting the whole juice box into the basket is funny along with the man stroking the shovel. The bench shots take you out of reality which is what music videos do. However, I don't particularly like the bench shot at 1:38 as it seems so natural, almost boring. Maybe at the end there could be a bright light shining out of the box to make whatever's in there really spectacular."
"The energy and youthfulness of the music video shines through, but you should add different, more comical transitions if possible to add to the quirky theme."
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